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Lufthansa Christmas Cardby ~Prain

Designs & Interfaces / Corporate

Yeah, even Santa Claus chose Lufthansa.
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After little critqiue of some people, i updated the
snow.
I think it looks quite better! Thank you all for your
constructive critique!

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Used Brushes:

Snow Brush by

Sleigh Brush by

Critique by `Jules1983 Nov 5, 2009, 3:13:58 AM

Now that is a pretty fabulous concept - easy to understand, straight to the point. The silhouette makes sense, the way you added "snow" on top of the buildings is a really nice touch. Also I like that you only used a few colors, keeping it all rather simple, yet organized. It doesn't look to busy, there is nothing that could distract the viewer or confuse them.
The only thing that bothers me (and please correct me if I'm wrong, or maybe it's just the font) is the apostrophe in "here's". Shouldn't it be the other way round? I'm not sure actually

Also, instead of the slight grain (snowflakes? rain?) I would've used bigger snowflakes, some kind of brush maybe.

Overall you did a pretty good job, though!

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Critique by ^Kaz-D Nov 3, 2009, 11:23:18 PM

This is something that I would expect to see up on a billboard it's that good! This has an excellent concept, and you have not disappointed in your technique when following it through. I really like the sillouhette of the buildings with the slight haze of light around them, they really compliment them and give a sort of 3 d effect. The sillouhette of the plane itself is perfect, and also the sleigh at the back is great. This is a simple picture with a great concept behind it and there's nothing I would say needs changing at all wtih this. Fantastic!